Metaphysical Commentaries and Other Poems by Dennis Daly

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Profound clashes of duality between certainty and uncertainty, good and evil, fate (read predestination) and chance drive the poetic narratives of Dennis Daly’s new book, Metaphysical Commentaries and Other Poems. Divided into three sections, the book deals with overall questions of consciousness and perception in the first two parts and specificity of action, advice, and transcendence in the third part.

Pantoums, sonnets, ghazals, and rhymed stanzaic pieces populate most of the first and second parts, while the third part, inspired and informed by Robert Fitzgerald’s translation/ adaptation of Omar Khayyam’s Rubaiyat, focuses on the philosophy of living and lessons learned and, like its predecessor, delivers its messages in a series of rhymed quatrains. The quatrains number 154 as compared with the Rubaiyat’s versions of 75, 110, or 101 (These are Fitzgeralds’s numbers. Khayyam probably wrote hundreds more.) Humor abounds and Daly often winks at Khayyam’s content through deft wordplay and occasional themes.

The seriousness of the themes matches the strictly traditional forms used by Daly. His intricacies and shades of meaning contrast with the lyrical lightness of Khayyam.  Both, however, utilize musical techniques to great effect.

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Description

  • Kind: Perfectbound
  • Pages: 112
  • Language: English
  • Date Published: June 2026
  • ISBN 978-1-962847-56-8

Praise

Dennis Daly’s book of poems, Metaphysical Commentaries and Other Poems, is a tour de force of formal ingenuity in which he plumbs the human quest’s fraught and sometimes contrarily insouciant encounter with mortality and destiny. “Through the stars, which salt the ominous sky, / Comes the grim message of desolation,” the poet declares in “Rendezvous,” while in “Life’s Reach” he affirms “the hands of the world complete creation.” The at once sublime and desperate influence of this double-bind, indeed this double-consciousness, haunts the poems. Probative, aphoristic, at times downright funny and always witty in the true metaphysical vein of John Donne, Daly’s poems are obsessive in their ultimate concerns and rangy in the terms and figures of their regard—from theology to chemistry and physics. The sonnets, ghazals, and plethora of pantoums in the book’s first two sections offer a dazzling spectrum of recognitions, not least of which is the hope that, just possibly, “Together we become what was never, / What was before time, a perfect somewhere.” A similar hope lifts the reader in the book’s final eponymous section, his monumental riff of Omar Khayam’s “Rubáiyát,” where he writes: “At the end of everything stands being, /A consciousness, both illimitable / And radiating, yet ego freeing. / Here man concludes, centered and all-seeing.” Such a moment of expansive vision refuses, still, to deny “Futures follow futures. So do mass graves.” In the end, what Metaphysical Commentaries offers is nothing less than the poet’s own wild and inveterate “dreamscapes / Of polished words that seem to form themselves.” —Daniel Tobin, author of Dusk, Empire: New and Selected Poems 1987-2024

Excerpt

The Devil Dreamt

One rainy morning the devil dreamt,
He postulated an upright man,
The guardian of our firmament,
Dread commander of our caravan.
He postulated an upright man
To what end only the godless know.
Dread commander of our caravan,
His methods shake up the status quo.
To what end only the godless know,
Those hitherto unmovable clods.
His methods shake up the status quo,
The chorus above applauds, applauds.
Those hitherto unmovable clods
Look to the future of selfless bents,
The chorus above applauds, applauds,
Still here and steadfast, the man repents.
Look to the future of selfless bents,
The guardian of our firmament,
Still here and steadfast, the man repents.
One rainy morning the devil dreamt.

Author

Denis DalyDennis Daly lives in Salem. Massachusetts with his wife Joanne. They have four adult children. Daly graduated from Boston College and earned an M.A. in English Literature from Northeastern University. He has previously published eleven books of poetry and poetic translations. His most recent books are Psalms Composed in Utter Darkness (Dos Madres, 2023) and Odd Man Out (MadHat Press, 2024). Many of Daly’s translations of Alisher Navoiy’s ghazals were published in Uyghur Poems, as part of Everyman’s Library Pocket Poets (Alfred A. Knopf, Random House). Among other jobs, Daly has worked as a dockworker, a union leader of a 9000-member industrial local, a city department head, and a community corrections director. He has traveled widely in central Asia. Please visit his blog here: dennisfdaly.blogspot.com.

Additional information

Weight 8 oz
Dimensions 9 × 6 × .25 in